You have a good eye for composition, especially at a young age.. Take this as a compliment from someone who has shot for fifteen years and currently shoots on commission for the Gap, DKNY and White House Black Market. Keep it up, you are a rare find at eighteen years old..
*It is very clever of you to add curves to the corners of the inner frame! It matches with the curves of your hat and arm, also making a nice entering point for your hats bottom line! Wish they were a little bit smooth!
* I cannot find the right words to desribe your eyes beauty so I pass that... *forgive me*
* Prefering your lips to be seperate makes your work much more impressive...